 CommentsDevious Comments This means a lot to me and I agree 100% with what you have to say and appreciate the first official critique ^^
-- Toph is who I am. Don't make me go blind bandit on you! *looks evilly* ATL Toph Bei Fong: Expect to see me at all major Atlanta cons! (maybe even CA's Dragon Con!) [link] <-- Visit my page!  W.I.T.C.H. Fan!  ^^ thats ok
and thanks <3 keep up the good artworks and i may do more for you  -- Wandering artist ... Woo! *goes art crazy and tries to get some stuff done*
-- Toph is who I am. Don't make me go blind bandit on you! *looks evilly* ATL Toph Bei Fong: Expect to see me at all major Atlanta cons! (maybe even CA's Dragon Con!) [link] <-- Visit my page! W.I.T.C.H. Fan! ^_^
-- Wandering artist ... ^^
-- Toph is who I am. Don't make me go blind bandit on you! *looks evilly* ATL Toph Bei Fong: Expect to see me at all major Atlanta cons! (maybe even CA's Dragon Con!) [link] <-- Visit my page! W.I.T.C.H. Fan! |
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You've definately improved over these times.
I like the messy kind of calligraphy feel to it which is great! considering mulan is an asian based movie.
A background would really bring the picture out. Even something simple.
You've kept the lightsource consistent with great shading. It would be better if you brought her more to the left and drew in her other hand. It would give it a better feel of completion.
I also like the sense of motion, the way her clothes are folded to her movement and how her hair is swishing. Her expression is also wonderful. :]